Chairs: Penny’s weapon of choice.
Sorry this page was a bit delayed.
If I have one comment to make, it’s that the timing here seems a bit off in those last 2 panels. I don’t know when each person is making their statement. When does the “NO” come in? Is it before Will speaks? Some time in the last two panels? After everybody speaks? That’s about the only thing that I’ve seen in any of these strips that seems off.
You’re doing a great job! Keep it up!
The “no” is supposed to be after everyone else speaks, but I can definitely see the confusion.
It might have been made more clear if the “No” and “It’s True” speech bubbles were reversed, and the “Joke” bubble placed higher on the page, maybe over the cabinet instead of over the table. People tend to read top to bottom more so than left to right. Especially those of us trained to read Manga ^_~.
Still, I absolutely love the comic, and I can’t wait for the next one!
Was “Okay” already a word back in these times? :P
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